Index: /anr/annexe-reponse.tex
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--- /anr/annexe-reponse.tex	(revision 315)
+++ /anr/annexe-reponse.tex	(revision 316)
@@ -7,10 +7,10 @@
 Dans la premiÃšre section, nous prÃ©sentons nos rÃ©ponses aux suggestions et
 remarques des experts en suivant l'ordre du dossier d'Ã©valuation qui nous a Ã©tÃ©
-retournÃ©. La seconde section quant Ã  elle, synthÃ©tise ces rÃ©ponses.
+retournÃ©. La seconde section, quant Ã  elle, synthÃ©tise ces rÃ©ponses.
 %%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%
 \subsection{RÃ©ponses sÃ©quentielles}
 %
 \subsubsection{Pertinence de la proposition au regard de l'appel Ã  projet}
-Pas de faiblesses signalÃ©es.
+Pas de faiblesse signalÃ©e.
 \subsubsection{QualitÃ© scientifique et technique de la proposition}
 \begin{description}
@@ -37,13 +37,14 @@
     possibilitÃ©.
   \item[Point 2 (\textit{pas de dimension recherche})]\mbox{}
-    \\ La dimension recherche se trouve Ã  plusieurs niveaux.
+    \\ La dimension recherche est présente Ã  différents niveaux de ce projet.
     \t%\note{R.1}
-    D'abord, synthÃ©tiser la mÃªme description de haut niveau soit par HLS
+    Tour d'abord, le fait de synthÃ©tiser la mÃªme description de haut niveau soit par HLS
     soit par ASIP, est Ã  notre connaissance non encore rÃ©alisÃ© Ã  ce jour.
     \t%\note{R.2}
-    L'utilisation de transformations polyÃ©driques  dans des outils de HLS
+    De plus, l'utilisation de transformations polyÃ©driques  dans des outils de HLS
     opÃ©rationnels n'est pas courant.
     \t%\note{R.3}
-    Les IPs sont d'abord des composants matÃ©riels gÃ©nÃ©riques, COACH permettra
+    \mustbecompleted{je ne comprends pas cet argument}
+	Les IPs sont d'abord des composants matÃ©riels gÃ©nÃ©riques, COACH permettra
     de concevoir des IPs trÃšs paramÃ©trables (hardware + software), il sera
     intÃ©ressant de voir ce que de tel IP peuvent apporter Ã  la micro
@@ -52,13 +53,13 @@
     Les outils de conception de SoC actuels ont soit une approche matÃ©rielle
     (sans limite sur les choix architecturaux), soit massivement parallÃšle Ã 
-    gros grain (MPSoC Ã  mÃ©moire cohÃ©rente).
-    Il en rÃ©sulte des systÃšmes trÃšs complexes nÃ©cessitant des spÃ©cialistes en
-    matÃ©riel (approche matÃ©rielle) ou en programmation parallÃšle.\\
+    gros grain (MPSoC Ã  mÃ©moire cohÃ©rente). Il en rÃ©sulte des systÃšmes trÃšs complexes nÃ©cessitant des spÃ©cialistes en
+    matÃ©riel (approche matÃ©rielle) ou en programmation parallÃšle.
     A l'opposÃ©, dans COACH l'architecture matÃ©rielle  est simple et quasiment fixÃ©e.
-    Le moyen d'accÃ©lÃ©ration est  parallÃ©lisme Ã  grain trÃšs fin gÃ©nÃ©rÃ© au sein
+    Le moyen d'accÃ©lÃ©ration est  le parallÃ©lisme Ã  grain trÃšs fin gÃ©nÃ©rÃ© au sein
     des coprocesseurs par HLS. Il en rÃ©sulte que des dÃ©veloppeurs de logiciel
     standard pourront utiliser COACH. \\
     La dÃ©monstration de la pertinence ou de la non pertinence de ces choix est
-    notre avis l'axe de recherche principal du projet.
+    Ã notre avis l'axe de recherche principal du projet car il impactera les orientations
+    technologiques liées à l'exploitation des plateformes matérielles de demain.
   \item[Point 3 (\textit{lien entre HPC et SoC embarquÃ©})]\mbox{}
     \\ %\note{X.1}
Index: /anr/section-1.tex
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@@ -5,5 +5,5 @@
 complex Multi-Processors System on Chip (MPSoC).
 \\
-During the last decade, the design of ASICs (Application Specific
+During the last decade, the use of ASICs (Application Specific
 Integrated Circuits) appeared to be more and more reserved to high volume markets, because
 the design and fabrication costs of such components exploded, due to increasing NRE (Non
Index: /anr/section-dissemination.tex
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--- /anr/section-dissemination.tex	(revision 315)
+++ /anr/section-dissemination.tex	(revision 316)
@@ -36,10 +36,15 @@
 Following the general policy of the SoCLib platform, the COACH project will be an 
 open infrastructure, and the COACH tools and libraries will be available in the framework 
-of the SoCLib WEB server. This server will be maintened by the UPMC/LIP6 laboratory. 
+of the SoCLib WEB server. This server will be maintened by the UPMC/LIP6 laboratory.
 
-\subsection{Exploitation of results}
+On the standardization side, some effort will be made for analysing how the work around IP-XACT 
+could be donated for the evolution of the IEEE 1685 standard. Magillem is board member of
+Accellera, TRT, TIMA and LIP6 are members, so we'll try to have some influence and at least
+communicate on the fact that our solutions will be compatible with the standard.
 
-The main goal of the COACH project is to help SMEs (Small and Medium Enterprises) 
-to enter the world of MPSoC technologies. For small companies, the cost is a primary concern.
+\subsection{Industrial exploitation of results}
+
+The main goal of the COACH project is to help SMEs (Small and Medium Enterprises) and even small design team in bigger entities
+to enter the world of MPSoC technologies. For small companies or design services, the cost is a primary concern.
 Moreover, these companies have not always in-home expertise in hardware design and VHDL modelling.
 As the fabrication costs of an ASIC is generally too high for SMEs, the COACH project focus
@@ -69,4 +74,7 @@
 that are not involved by the free software policy, but these libraries will be supported by the 
 synthesis tools developed in the COACH project.
+\item
+\mds will propose a commercial version of COACH, integrated into Magillem tool suite and compatible with a standard IP-XACT flow.
+This version will integrate some generic features, already available for production (some of them from standard Magillem pack, some other developped in COACH). Other COACH features will have to be tailored for the specifics of the customer framework and will generate service business.
 \end{itemize}
 
@@ -92,6 +100,8 @@
 
 - This project has been set up for maximizing the industrial exploitation of results. The role of \mds will
-be to ensure this objective and after the project, we expect a growing contribution for rising the turnover (2015: 3 new customers = 150keuros, 
-2016: 5 new customers = 400keuros, 2017: 10 new customers = 1Meuros)
+be to ensure this objective and after the project, we expect a growing contribution for rising the turnover (2015: 2 new customers = 100keuros, 
+2016: 4 new customers = 250keuros, 2017: 5 new customers = 400Keuros). These numbers are not high but we tried to keep them realistic. 
+The return on investment is nevertheless important and we can also expect side effects of this project on sales with existing 
+*customers and prospects interrested in the global magillem solution.
 
 
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+++ /anr/task-dissemination.tex	(revision 316)
@@ -6,9 +6,10 @@
 \begin{objectif}
 This task relates to the diffusion of the project results.
-The objective is to ensure the COACH dissemination
+The classical objective is to ensure the dissemination of the result into the community
 by writing papers,
 by presenting COACH in trade shows
 and by publishing on a public WEB site all the information that a COACH user requires.
-Those lasts are:
+The main objective is to prepare the further industrial exploitation of the results.
+The deliverables to reach these goals will be:
 \begin{itemize}
   \item The packaging of COACH milestones and final release and their associated
@@ -39,5 +40,5 @@
     \begin{livrable}
     \itemV{6}{12}{d+x}{\Supmc}{Tutorial}
-        It will illustrate the features the T0+12 milestone provides especially:
+        It will illustrate the features that the T0+12 milestone provides especially:
         \begin{description}
         \item[HPC] This tutorial section shows how an application can be split into
@@ -57,5 +58,6 @@
             FPGA.
           \item[Inegration (\Smds)] This section is dedicated to the integration of
-            COACH generated IP into an IP-XACT based design flow such as SOCKET.
+            COACH generated IP into an IP-XACT based design flow such as the one define in the SoCket project for critical systems 
+		and which is generic enough to support a wide range of application domains.
         \end{description}
     \end{livrable}
@@ -88,5 +90,6 @@
         This deliverable groups the effort to make to know COACH. It consists
         mainly in writing/submitting papers and in presenting COACH in to trade
-        show and workshop and organizing a final white paper.
+        show and workshop and organizing a final white paper. 
+	This white paper will facilitates the dissemination towards industrial prospects.
    \end{livrable}
 \end{workpackage}
