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@@ -44,5 +44,5 @@
 researches on HPC-FPGA are mainly conducted in the USA. 
 None of the approaches developed in these researches are fulfilling entirely the
-challenges described above. For example, Convey Computer proposes application-specific instruction set extension of x86 cores in FPGA accelerator,
+challenges described above. For example, Convey Computer proposes application-specific instruction set extension of x86 cores in an FPGA accelerator,
 but extension generation is not automated and requires hardware design skills.
 Mitrionics has an elegant solution based on a compute engine specifically
@@ -74,9 +74,9 @@
 tool will then automatically generate synthesizable Hardware Description
 Language (HDL) code mapped to \xilinx pre-optimized algorithms.
-However, this tool targets only DSP based algorithms, \xilinx FPGAs and
+However, this tool targets onlysignal processing algorithms, \xilinx FPGAs and
 cannot handle a complete SoC. Thus, it is not really a system synthesis tool.
 \\
 In the opposite, SOPC Builder~\cite{spoc-builder} from \altera and \xilinx 
-Platform Studio XPS from \xilinx allows to describe a system, to synthesize it, 
+Platform Studio XPS from \xilinx allow to describe a system, to synthesize it, 
 to program it into a target FPGA and to upload a software application.
 Both SOPC Builder and XPS, allow designers to select and parameterize components from 
@@ -126,5 +126,5 @@
 Low power consumption constraint which is mandatory for embedded systems is not yet 
 well handled or not handled at all by the HLS tools already available,
-\item The parallelism is extracted from initial specification.
+\item The parallelism is extracted from the initial specification.
 To get more parallelism or to reduce the amount of required memory in the SoC, the user
 must re-write the algorithmic specification while there are techniques such as polyedric
@@ -166,5 +166,5 @@
 This approach however has a severe weakness, since it also significantly reduces 
 opportunities for achieving good speedups (most speedups remain between 1.5x and 
-2.5x), since ISEs performance is generally tied down by I/O constraints as 
+2.5x), since ISEs performance is generally limited by I/O constraints as 
 they generally rely on the main CPU register file to access data.
 
@@ -219,5 +219,5 @@
 As a side effect, it has been observed that the polyhedral model is a useful
 tool for many other optimization, like memory reduction and locality
-improvement. Another point is
+improvement. Itshould be noted 
 that the polyhedral model \emph{stricto sensu} applies only to
 very regular programs. Its extension to more general programs is
@@ -245,7 +245,7 @@
 are members of the consortium and the board is incorporating top actors 
 (STM, NXP, TI, ARM, FREESCALE, LSI, Mentor, Synopsys and Cadence), ensuring the 
-wide adoption by industry. Initiatives have already% work for (paul)
+wide adoption by industry. Initiatives have already
 attempted to extend this standard
-to AMS IPs packaging domain (MEDEA+ Beyond Dreams Project) and to Hardware Dependent 
+to the AMS IPs packaging domain (MEDEA+ Beyond Dreams Project) and to Hardware Dependent 
 Software layers (MEDEA+ SoftSoc project) and Accellera is reusing these results for 
 further releases.
Index: /anr/section-issues.tex
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 \end{table}
 %
-Microelectronic components allow the integration of complex functions into products, increases
+Microelectronic components allow integration of complex functions into products, increases
 commercial attractivity of these products and improves their competitivity.
-\cite{rapport-ministere} estimates a 7\% growth of the micro-electronic market until 2015 minimum.
+\cite{rapport-ministere} estimates a 7\% growth of the micro-electronic market until 2015 at least.
 Multimedia and communication sectors have taken advantage from microelectronics facilities
 thanks to the developpment of design methodologies and tools for embedded systems.
@@ -36,12 +36,12 @@
 An IC foundry costs several billions of euros and the fabrication of a specific circuit
 costs several millions. For example a conservative estimate for a 65nm ASIC project is 10
-million USD. Consequently, it is more and more unaffordable to design and fabricate ASICs for low and medium 
-volume markets and the new trend for building the new generation products will be multi processors SoCs and programmable logic for co-processsing.
+million \$ . Consequently, it is more and more unaffordable to design and fabricate ASICs for low and medium 
+volume markets and the new trend for building the new generation products will be multi processors SoCs and 
+programmable logic for co-processsing.
 \\
-According to a market survey (J-M. Chery, CTO ST Microelectronics at European NanoelectronicsForum 2010), the global growth is 30 Billons\$ between 2009-2013 for multimedia and communication sectors; this is 6 times more than all other domains like security, home automation, health.
-The predominance%paul
-the multimedia and communication sectors 
-%results paul
-are due to their being predominently a mass market.
+According to a market survey (J-M. Chery, CTO ST Microelectronics at European NanoelectronicsForum 2010), 
+the global growth is 30 billon\$ between 2009-2013 for the multimedia and communication sectors; this is 
+6 times more than all other domains like security, home automation or health.
+The predominance of the multimedia and communication sectors are due to their being predominently a mass market.
 %
 \subsubsection*{FPGAs and Embedded Systems}
@@ -82,5 +82,6 @@
 Donald Newell, AMD technical manager, envisions that such circuits will be at the heart of most of the electronic 
 products (eg. PDAs and nomad items) and even personal computers. 
-To take benefit of such architecture, developping and deploying application will require innovative codesign methods and tools.
+To take benefit of such architectures, developping and deploying application will require innovative 
+codesign methods and tools.
 
 %
@@ -96,5 +97,5 @@
 The COACH project proposes an open-source framework for mapping multi-tasks software applications
 on Field Programmable Gate Array circuits (FPGA).
-It aims to propose solutions to the societal/economical challenges by
+Its aim is to propose solutions to the societal/economical challenges by
 providing SMEs novel design capabilities enabling them to increase their
 design productivity with design exploration and synthesis methods that are placed on top 
@@ -109,4 +110,5 @@
 to launch start-ups in software engineering.
 \\
-So this may increase the total%amount (paul)
-number of engineers working in this domain: today in France the total is only 26,000 of which 16,000 are in big companies \cite{rapport-ministere}.
+So this may increase the total
+number of engineers working in this domain: today in France the total is only 26,000 of which 
+16,000 are in big companies \cite{rapport-ministere}.
Index: /anr/section-position.tex
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 design flow, using the IP-XACT IEEE 1685 standard
 \end{itemize}
-COACH outcome will contribute to strengthen Europe's competitive position by developing
+The COACH results will contribute to strengthen Europe's competitive position by developing
 technologies and methodologies for product design, focusing (in compliance with the
 %scope of the above program) on technologies, engineering methodologies, novel tools,
@@ -68,5 +68,5 @@
     proposes to develop a reconfigurable processor, exhibiting high
     silicon density and power efficiency, able to adapt its computing
-    structure to computation patterns that can be speed-up and/or
+    structure to computation patterns that can be faster or more
     power efficient.  %The ROMA project study a pipeline of
     %evolved low-power coarse grain reconfigurable operators to avoid
@@ -152,5 +152,6 @@
 \subsubsection*{Relevance to the call axis}
 This project answer to the global statement of the call "INGENIERIE NUMERIQUE ET SECURITE (INS)" by proposing 
-methods and tools for the design of application to be run on platforms of the next generation. Results will be gained in term of productivity, 
+methods and tools for the design of application to be run on platforms of the next generation. 
+Inprovements can be expected for productivity, 
 time-to-market (automation and code generation) and safety (management of high level sepcifications down to implementation).
 In this call, the COACH project totally fulfills the objectives of the axis 2 "METHODES,
@@ -182,6 +183,6 @@
 %
 The results of the COACH project will help users to build cryptographic secure systems implemented in
-hardware or both in software/hardware in an effective way, substantially enhancing the
-process productivity of the cryptographic algorithms hardware synthesis, improving the
+in a combination of hardware and software in an effective way, substantially enhancing the
+productivity of the field, improving the
 quality and reducing the design time and the cost of synthesised cryptographic devices.
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