Changeset 347 for anr

Timestamp:

Feb 1, 2011, 3:02:50 PM (14 years ago)

Author:

coach

Message:

minor language modifications

Location:

anr

Files:

• task-csg.tex (modified) (3 diffs)
• task-management.tex (modified) (1 diff)

anr/task-csg.tex

@@ -17 +17 @@
     (see Figures~\ref{archi-csg} and ~\ref{archi-hls}).
 \end{itemize}
-A first release will be delivered at $T0+12$ to allow the demonstrators to start working.
+A first release will be delivered at $T0+12$ to allow an early start of demonstrator
+implementations.
 This release will include the standard communication schemes based on SoCLib MWMR component
 and support the neutral architectural template for prototyping and hardware generation.
@@ -41 +42 @@
     \begin{livrable}
     \itemV{6}{8}{x}{\Stima}{DNA OS}
-        Idenfication and Specification of the drivers required for
+        Identification and Specification of the drivers required for
         the first CSG release using a vendor neutral virtual
         prototype.
@@ -80 +81 @@
         design the core of CSG, 2) \Stima will design the part concerning the
         generation of system software and the configuration of CSG to other OS.
-        3) \Smds will focus to interface CSG to the IP-XACT format for
+        3) \Smds will focus on interfacing CSG to the IP-XACT format for
         generating IP integrable into a IP-XACT flow such as the one defined in the SoCket project and to
         configure CSG to new IP or plate-form.

anr/task-management.tex

@@ -47 +47 @@
       \itemL{6}{36}{x}{\Supmc}{Development \& dissemination \ganttlf infrastructure}{1:.5:.5}
         The management of the development infrastructure consists mainly of
-        adding \& suppressing account, retrieving forgotten passwords, adding
-        conference publications to web site, creation and closing development
-        branch, backup, restoration, ....
+        adding and suppressing accounts, retrieving forgotten passwords, adding
+        conference publications to the project web site, creation and closing development
+        branches, backup, restoration, ....
     \end{livrable}
 \end{workpackage}