Changeset 378 for anr/section-position.tex

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Feb 15, 2011, 4:15:17 PM (14 years ago)

Author:

coach

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minor

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• anr/section-position.tex (modified) (2 diffs)

anr/section-position.tex

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   \item
     Regarding industrial flow integration \mds will bring its strong expertise
-    in IEEE 1685 (IP-XACT) standard. \mds team is involved and contributes actively
-    to it since 2003 and Magillem tool suite is used for its validation. Magillem is used in 
+    in IEEE 1685 (IP-XACT) standard. The \mds team is involved and contributes actively
+    to it since 2003 and the Magillem tool suite is used for its validation. Magillem is used in 
     industrial production flows of ST, NXP, TI, Qualcomm, and system integrators like Thales, 
     Astrium, Thomson, etc. This guarantees a strong alignement on customers needs and enhanced results exploitation.
@@ -197 +197 @@
 \subsubsection*{European and international positioning}
 %
-Finally, it is worth to note that this project covers priorities defined by the commission 
+Finally, it is worth noting that this project covers priorities defined by the commission 
 experts in the field of Information Technologies Society (IST) for Embedded
 Systems: \textit{ $<<$Concepts, methods and tools for designing systems dealing with systems complexity