Changeset 119 for anr/section-6.2.tex

Timestamp:

Feb 9, 2010, 1:02:52 PM (15 years ago)

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coach

Message:

Paul: Minor language modifications.

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• anr/section-6.2.tex (modified) (2 diffs)

anr/section-6.2.tex

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-The Coach project will be coordinated by the Professor Alain Greiner from 
+The Coach project will be coordinated by professor Alain Greiner from 
 Université Pierre et Marie Curie.
 Alain Greiner is the initiator and the main architect of the SoCLib project.
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 (5 of them are involved in the Coach project).
 The SoCLib project was managed by Thales, but the technical coordination has been done
-by Alain Greiner, that has a good experience in coordinating large technical projects
+by Alain Greiner, who has a good experience in coordinating large technical projects
 in both industrial and academic contexts: