Changeset 348 for anr/task-dissemination.tex

Timestamp:

Feb 1, 2011, 4:13:41 PM (14 years ago)

Author:

coach

Message:

minor language modifications

File:

• anr/task-dissemination.tex (modified) (3 diffs)

anr/task-dissemination.tex

@@ -28 +28 @@
         This deliverable deals with the packaging of the open sources  milestones and
         final releases with their installation manuals and to publish then into the WEB
-        site. This packaging will be done for standard Unix environment using
+        site. This packaging will be done for standard Unix environments using
         the usual open source installation configuration tools (automake, autoconf). 
       \itemL{6}{36}{d+x}{\Smds}{Commercial release}{1:.5:.5}
@@ -66 +66 @@
    \begin{livrable}
    \itemL{21}{27}{d}{\Stima}{CSG User manual}{0:.5:1}
-        This user manual shows how to generate a complete HW/SW system by using CSG tool.
+        This user manual shows how to generate a complete HW/SW system by using the CSG tool.
     \itemL{21}{27}{d}{\Slip}{HAS front-end user manual}{0:.5:1}
         This user manual shows how to apply loop transformations to a task.
@@ -88 +88 @@
         \OtherPartner{12}{36}{\Sbull}  {0:.5:.5}
         \OtherPartner{12}{36}{\Sthales}{0:1:1}
-        This deliverable groups the effort to make to know COACH. It consists
+        This deliverable groups the effort to make COACH better known. It consists
         mainly in writing/submitting papers and in presenting COACH in to trade
         show and workshop and organizing a final white paper.